(Sorry I didn’t post yesterday. I am dying of an exciting new plague [again]. Today’s CYOA was: will I spend the evening posting on the blog, or languishing in a hospital gurney? I figured posting was cheaper. If you don’t hear from me next week, assume I died.)
Toward the end of last year’s post Setting the Scene, I mentioned the importance and influence of realistic cultures in a story’s setting. This week, we’re going to geek out on sociology to create a flexible framework for cultures.
While there’s a bit of overlap between them, there are five widely accepted aspects of culture: symbols, language, values, beliefs, and norms. When creating your own cultures, try to incorporate something of each of these aspects to have a layered, realistic culture. If you’re not creating your own culture, but rather writing about a premade one (maybe you’re writing historical, contemporary, fanfic, whatevs), you should also include these aspects to avoid a society that seems more like a cardboard cutout than an actual culture.
But before we get into any definitions, let’s chat for a moment about keeping things appropriate. No, I’m not talking about your characters’ potty language or sextivities. I’m talking about keeping your culture in sync with your setting. It wouldn’t make sense for a language to have forty words for ice if its speakers lived in the tropics. Or if it does, there had better be a good reason, like mass immigration or cultural appropriation or whatnot.
As we work through each of these aspects (and order really doesn’t matter), keep in mind the climate and resources this culture would develop in. Don’t make all the houses log cabins if they live on the tundra. Don’t develop detailed hunting ceremonies for your herbivorous aliens. Don’t have your country’s national flower be a blossom that doesn’t grow there. You get the idea. (But seriously, if there are great reasons, let ‘er rip. Weird little discrepancies are wonderful, like how California’s state animal doesn’t actually exist in California because settlers and gold panners hunted it to extinction a century ago.)
Values Although this will vary a bit from person to person, each culture has an ‘average’ set of values that people care about. Values help to define acceptable behaviors within the cultural group by delineating between good and bad. Keep in mind that a single character commonly juggles the values of multiple culture groups, such as a character who holds the values of an average Australian (such as egalitarianism) in addition to the values of an Orthodox Jew (such as daily study of the Torah). For your culture, think about the values that people hold dear, such as freedom, wealth, lineage, etc.
Beliefs Belief systems are the convictions and understandings that people hold as truth, and are structured upon values. These beliefs often mirror those of a religion, but can also be purely secular. Think about people’s beliefs concerning the dangers of GMOs (value of health and safety) or the glory of communism (value of cooperation and group-before-self) or the messianic Coming of Trump (value of success and independence); no matter where you stand on these issues, there are little culture pockets at the fringes of the spectrum with irrational beliefs about whether these things will save or destroy the world, and there is no convincing them otherwise. Whether your culture has strong ties to religion, or strives to keep itself separate from such things, make sure to have a set of beliefs that factor into the decision-making process of your characters.
Norms The rules and traditions of a culture make up its social norms. Norms run the gamut from the practice of ‘folkways’, or things that are expected but not insisted upon (American examples: handshake at first meeting, eye contact during conversation), to the observance of taboos (no pedophilia, no cannibalism, nooo). Breaking of norms can result in mild censure (an annoyed parent sighing “Kids these days”) to severe societal punishment (imprisonment, exile, execution) depending on the values and beliefs that they violate. The more precious the value, the more harsh the punishment. When creating your culture, think of the traditions and social rules that would arise surrounding a high value on knowing one’s lineage, or maintaining a prescribed diet, or raising children to be successful hunters, or whatever values your culture holds, and weave that into the norms.
Symbols You know how Americans can look at a picture of a flying eagle and immediately start shooting off fireworks and chanting, “USA! USA!”? That’s because this bird, who doesn’t give a flying poop about nationality, is a culture symbol (as are the fireworks and the USA chanting). Symbols can be a physical object, such as the cross of Christianity, or a nonphysical act, such as a formal bow typifying Japanese politeness. So think about what kind of symbols you can work into your culture. What styles of art, music, architecture do your characters employ? What significance do certain colors carry/shapes/etc carry? What goes on the banner snapping in the wind over the troops?
Language You don’t really have to go out and make up a whole language from scratch- although it is way fun- but have an understanding of how your characters speak. What words and ideas come up frequently? What kinds of phrases and idioms arise that wouldn’t necessarily find use in whatever language your book is written in? Make sure that these language quirks shine through in your characters’ voices. (If you do want to make a language from scratch, check out Language Building Basics to get started.)
Once you have considered each of these cultural aspects, go back and make sure that they make sense as a whole. Do the different aspects all support one another? Are these social norms something a person would actually be willing to live? Does the culture make sense within the region that gave birth to it (allowing for the natural evolution of human societies)? And as always, give yourself lots of room to tweak and adjust, since it probably won’t all come together on the first go.
A final note on creating cultures: as with all worldbuilding, not everything you come up with will make its way into the story (hopefully). But understanding it as the author will lend more depth to your work, allowing for deeper immersion and a richer backdrop. Plus, I am a nerd and this stuff is more fun than dishes.
Until next week, happy writing!